Would you like to visit
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вот исправленный вариант:
-Hello!
-Hello!
-Where are you going to spend your summer holidays?
-I am going to the Black Sea,and you?
-I am going to Moscow in June.Have you ever been to Moscow?
-Yes,of course!It is one of my favourite cities!
-Really!There is my birthday in July.Do you want to visit my birthday party?
-Of course I want!But I can`t.I will be not in Rostov.
-Oh,it is bad!
-I am so sorry!
-Well.What places are ypu going to visit this summer?
-O.K. I want to visit museums and parks of Rostov-on-Don.
-And I want to visit the Kremlin.
-Oh,it is beautiful!I was there!
I am going to the Black Sea,and you?
I am going to Moscow on June.Have you ever been to Moscow?
только эти ошибки, а так все правильно
I am going to the Moscow in June.
-Hello!
-Hello!
-Where are you going to spend your summer holidays?
-I am going to the Black Sea,and you?
-I am going to Moscow on June.Have you ever been to Moscow?
-Yes,of course!It is one of my favourite cities!
-Really!My birthday will be on July. Would you like to visit my birthday party?
-Of course I do! But I can`t. I won`t be in Rostov.
-Oh, it's a pity!
-I am so sorry!
-Well. Which places are you going to visit this summer?
-O.K. I want to visit museums and parks of Rostov-on-Don.
-And I want to visit the Kremlin.
-Oh,it is beautiful!I was there!
I am going to the Black Sea
Конструкция going to используется без глагола движения:) )
остальные ошибки мелкие, не такие важные: )
Удачи!
Where are you going to spend your summer holidays?
-I am going to SPEND ...
I am going to go to Moscow -to visit- лучше будет
Have you ever been to Moscow? IN Moscow
Do you want to visit my birthday party?-would you like to come to my birthday party-как то приятнее на слух и тогда ответ Of course
I can`t.I won`t in Rostov.-i`ll be out of Rostov
Oh,it is bad!- what`s a pity- типа.. ои как же жаль.. .
Oh,it is beautiful!I was in it!-Oh,it is beautiful? isn`t it?- время ж настаящее was не может быть...
-Hello!
-Hello!
-Where are you going to spend your summer holidays?
-I am going to the Black Sea,and you?
-I am going to Moscow on June.Have you ever been to Moscow?
-Yes,of course!It is one of my favourite cities!
-Really!My birthday will be on July. Would you like to visit my birthday party?
-Of course I do! But I can`t. I won`t be in Rostov.
-Oh, it's a pity!
-I am so sorry!
-Well. Which places are you going to visit this summer?
-O.K. I want to visit museums and parks of Rostov-on-Don.
-And I want to visit the Kremlin.
-Oh,it is beautiful!I was there!