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Dear Abbas.
Thank you for the invitation to your birthday party. I hope you 'll be happy to see your friends. I wish I could come too, but I've got a new job, and next week I am to go on a business trip to Moscow. If everything goes well, I'll be appointed Branch Director of a large enterprise. This will allow me to earn the money I need to travel. I hope you'll understand me.
If I prove myself to be a good employee I'll earn a vacation and will be able come visit you in London.
We could go to the casino, clubs, and cinemas. And if the weather permits we could go on a fishing trip. I'll teach you to fish..
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Dear Abbas.
Thank you for the invitation to your birthday party. I hope that you will have a wonderful time. Unfortunately I can't come to you in London, because I've got a new job, and next week I go on a business trip to Moscow. If all goes well, then I will be the Director of the branch of a large enterprise. I understand that friendship is more important than work, but if I don't go on a business trip, then I won't even have the money to visit you in England. I think, in my place you would have done the same.
I'm sorry for the fact that I'm so busy. But this year I have to work well, that I would be a good employee. Then I'll go on vacation and come to you in London.
Of course, when I'll get back, your birthday will be already held. But sure, we will go to the casino, clubs, and cinemas. And if there is good weather than we go on a fishing trip. I'll teach you to fish, you'll catch a fish, and I will make a fish soup.
Forgive me, my friend Abbas. Thank you again for the invitation. Say Hello to my friends. And please, send me some photos on my e-mail from your party. Find out when it is better for you to come.
Love Daniel.