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Ответ от Helena S-va[гуру]
The key feature - A distinctive feature
is no - is a lack of
When they were walking in - While they were strolling along
the local merchants - local merchants
would guess their nationality without fail, -would tell their nationality unmistakably
начинали приглашать - started inviting
And what do you know? - And guess what?
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