my friend has

Ответ от Psychomagnet[эксперт]
тавтологии много My Ideal Friend мозолит глаза. Замените его кое-где на the one, he...

Ответ от Elena[гуру]
An Ideal friend.
My ideal friend will be considerate, brainy, supportive, loyal,
and responsible. HE will have a sense of humor.
We will always get together WITH MY IDEAL FRIEND, have a good
laugh, keep secrets to each other. We will rely on each other ,
care about each other, talk OUR problems through and cheer
each other no matter what HAPPENS. THE appearance of my ideal friend HAS
to be beautiful, 'cause I consider that only THE person who has A BEAUTIFUL
appearance has beautiful soul (BECAUSE I CONSIDER THAT ONLY BEAUTIFUL PERSON CAN HAVE BEAUTIFUL SOUL). And, of course, I want, that my friend
has beautiful soul (AND OF COURSE I WANT MY FRIEND TO HAVE BEAUTIFUL SOUL). More than that, my ideal friend will be
fashionable and attractive.So, I think that is all. And I believe,
that we WILL meet one day.
ОШИБКИ ВЫДЕЛЕНЫ ЗАГЛАВНЫМИ БУКВАМИ. ПРЕДЛОЖЕНИЯ В СКОБКАХ - ЭТО ДРУГОЙ ВАРИАНТ СКАЗАННОГО, МНЕ КАЖЕТСЯ, ЧТО ОН ЗВУЧИТ БОЛЕЕ ПО-АНГЛИЙСКИ, ЧЕМ ПРЕДЛОЖЕННЫЙ ВАМИ. УДАЧИ!!

Ответ от Пользователь удален[активный]
An Ideal friend.
My ideal friend will be considerate, intelligent, supportive, loyal,
and responsible. My ideal friend will have a sense of humor.
With my ideal friend we will always get together, have a good
laugh,reveal secrets to each other. We will rely on each other ,
care about each other, talk our problems through and cheer
each other no matter what. The appearance of my ideal friend has
to be beautiful, 'cause I consider that only the person who has a beautiful
appearance has a beautiful soul. And, of course, I want my friend to have
a beautiful soul. More than that, my ideal friend will be
fashionable and attractive.So, I think that is all. And I believe,
that we will meet some day.
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Ответ от Олег Бхамбри[активный]
An Ideal friend.
My ideal friend will be considerate, brainy, supportive, loyal,
and responsible. My ideal friend will have a sense of humor.
With my ideal friend we will always get together, have a good
laugh, keep secrets to each other. We will rely on each other ,
care about each other, talk one’ s problems through and cheer
each other no matter what. Appearance of my ideal friend have
to be beautiful, 'cause I consider that only person who has beauty
appearance has beautiful soul. And, of course, I want, that my friend
has beautiful soul. More than that, my ideal friend will be
fashionable and attractive.So, I think that is all. And I believe,
that we meet one day.
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Ответ от Marisha kozhevnikova[эксперт]
An Ideal friend.
My ideal friend will be considerate, brainy, supportive, loyal,
and responsible. My ideal friend will have a sense of humor.
With my ideal friend we will always get together, have a good
laugh, keep secrets to each other. We will rely on each other ,
care about each other, talk one’s problems through and cheer
each other no matter what. Appearance of my ideal friend have
to be beautiful, 'cause I consider that only person who has beauty
appearance has beautiful soul. And, of course, I want, that my friend
has beautiful soul. More than that, my ideal friend will be
fashionable and attractive. So, I think that is all. And I believe,
that we meet one day.

Ответ от Егор Королёв[новичек]
An Ideal friend.
My ideal friend will be considerate, brainy, supportive, loyal,
and responsible. My ideal friend will have a sense of humor.
With my ideal friend we will always get together, have a good
laugh, keep secrets to each other. We will rely on each other ,
care about each other, talk one’ s problems through and cheer
each other no matter what. Appearance of my ideal friend have
to be beautiful, 'cause I consider that only person who has beauty
appearance has beautiful soul. And, of course, I want, that my friend
has beautiful soul. More than that, my ideal friend will be
fashionable and attractive.So, I think that is all. And I believe,
that we meet one day.

Ответ от Герман хан[новичек]
The ideal friend. My ideal friend will be attentive, intelligent, supportive, loyal, and responsible. My ideal friend will have a tendency of humor. My ideal friend we will always gather to have a good laugh, keep secrets to each other. We depend on each other, care about each other, talk one's problems through and applaud each other no matter what. My ideal friend have to be beautiful cause, I believe that the only person that has the appearance of beauty, has a beautiful spirit. And, of course, I want this my friend has a beautiful spirit. More than that, my ideal friend will be fashionable and attractive. So, I think that's it. And I believe we meet one day

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боже мой сколько ошибок

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