my speciality



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Ответ от Mashanya[гуру]
А как же краткость = сестра таланта?: -) Мораль читать не буду, просто подправлю то, что глаз выхватил... не говорю, что я последняя инстанция.. . Let me introduce myself. My full name is <беспощадно вымарано цензурой>. I am A full-time student of THE <название города> State University. I -- study at the economic faculty, and my speciality is applied informatics in economy. The students of our department are specializing (SPECIALIZE) in economic sciences and in computer technologies. Computer technologies and processing information as a part of our studying ARE vitally important in the life of all people who want to reach (ACHIEVE) some heights (GOALS) in this world. This is A discipline -- based on a number of subjects, such as: math, visual programming, network security, theory of systems, et cetera. Thus, we want to simplify the process OF education helping people to process information faster AND learning more. But that’s not the only problem our speciality fights (STRUGGLES) with. We also develop algorithms and methods for processing data in huge databases, searching machines, scientific calculations and many more… Economic sciences as a part of our studying are also very important in our world and especially in our country, which needs intelligent businesspeople to strengthen its economy. Moreover, I think that PEOPLE with deep knowledge OF management, economy of production, sociology and basis of business organization can find AN interesting and more high-wageD job easier than others. Our knowledge in these disciplines can help us to get SOME power and respect, to achieve success in our LIVES and, maybe, to make this world better. Informatics was my favorite subject AT school, but when I LEFT school, I thought that graduates of AN economic faculty are (WERE) specialists which are (WERE) in great demand, and that\'s why I chose this speciality. And now I think that I was not wrong. All students of my speciality take 3 yearS of general courses followed by 2 years of specialized training in some field of economy or informatics. As a second year student, I can say that to learn in my speciality is not too easy. Sometimes it is boring, sometimes I want to sleep AT THE (DURING THE) lectures, sometimes I can’t understand ANYTHING, but -- it is OFTEN very interesting, and I can say that professors DO everything (DO THEIR BEST) to improve (THE) studentS\' skills. So, I think that my speciality as a combination of computer technologies and economic sciences is a good way to make A successful career.

Ответ от Владимир Хрусталев[гуру]
the process education пропущено of: the process of education. Предложение As a second year student I can say that to learn in my speciality is not too easy может стоит изменить так: As a second year student I can say that studies in my speciality is n

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