Автор Spletnik59 spletnik59 задал вопрос в разделе Лингвистика
Проверьте пожалуйста моё сочинение на тему \"About my self\" и получил лучший ответ
Ответ от Ellen[гуру]
About Myself My name is Ann. My full name is Kalinicheva Anna Sergeevna. I am fifteen. I was born in Moscow. Nowadays i live in Moscow too. My family isn\'t very big, it consistS of my dad, my mom, my twin-sister, me and my lovely cat. My family is very harmonious. I\'ve just finished school. Now i go to college and i think i have great people as my course mates. I like my future profession and i\'m going to do my best to become the good specialist. In free time i like to go for a walk with my friends, go to the cinema and see good films at home. I am interested in the cinema (кинематографом) . My hobby is to make videos, using my computer, after (по мотивам) serials and films. I like to cook and i make it good, because all members of my family cook good. My favourite kind of sport is tennis, but i don\'t play it. I visit the Kremlin Cup tennis tournament yearly.
ошибка I am fifteen years old My family is not very big
начнём с того, что ошибка в самом названии сочинения правильно "myself" 1) I am fifteenth, правильно I am fifteen years old 2) and watch good films of the house, правильно and watch good films at home 3) I take interest to the movie, прави
myself пишется слитно I am fifteen. "There are five of us. It is my mom, dad, twin-sister,I and my favorite cat" мне кажется, лучше написать: I have big family. My family consist of my mom, dad, twin-sister,I and my favorite cat " I ta